The Official Writing Challenge
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10/19/06
Hehe! Thanks for the laugh, especially the last one. I really needed it (the laugh). Good job.
10/20/06
Cute anecdotes! I especially like the one with the Red Hatters.

A closer edit might catch little things like apostrophe faults, a tense switch, etc., and give your charming story that extra sparkle.