The Official Writing Challenge
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03/22/05
I love the story of Gideon! The way you chose another character to watch the events was interesting, a fresh twist. My favorite thing about this story is how the angel of the Lord greets Gideon as a man of valor, or mighty warrior - when the guy was hiding in a wine press! God can use anybody he wants, can't he? Thanks for sharing your story.
03/23/05
Likewise, the concept of the call and promise of God's presence while hiding out was interesting. And to think we serve the same God. Thanks for this.
You really captured the voice of Gideon and made us feel like we were there.
03/26/05
Beautifully written. I love it when someone goes into a Bible story and writes as though he/she had been the boy hiding in the bushes. Great writing skills. Loved it.