The Official Writing Challenge
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03/22/05
I love the story of Gideon! The way you chose another character to watch the events was interesting, a fresh twist. My favorite thing about this story is how the angel of the Lord greets Gideon as a man of valor, or mighty warrior - when the guy was hiding in a wine press! God can use anybody he wants, can't he? Thanks for sharing your story.
03/23/05
Likewise, the concept of the call and promise of God's presence while hiding out was interesting. And to think we serve the same God. Thanks for this.
03/25/05
You really captured the voice of Gideon and made us feel like we were there.
03/26/05
Beautifully written. I love it when someone goes into a Bible story and writes as though he/she had been the boy hiding in the bushes. Great writing skills. Loved it.