The Official Writing Challenge
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10/19/06
This is awesome! You've got my vote!
10/19/06
Clever and creative. I think a lot of people can reaslte to this person. Excellent writing. Keep up the great work.
10/19/06
Superb!

Watch out for isles / aisles...unless your church is in an archipelago...

The voice in this piece is unique and richly seasoned. Love it.
10/23/06
Oh yah! This is a much needed lesson delivered superbly! Good writing.
10/29/06
Well done, I really enjoyed this, you set yourself a difficult task and nailed it! yeggy
11/10/06
This was absolutely great!Fighting the urge to become Jr. Holy Spirit and wear a Jr. Holy Spirit badge can only be done through a work of the Holy Spirit. You portrayed that so well in your story. I loved it! May God remove our legalistic eyes and replace them with grace, mercy and love.