The Official Writing Challenge
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10/19/06
Love the paragraph where she looks in the mirror--what great symbolism!
10/20/06
Good article. We can run but we can't hide from God. We must always face the truth.
I don't think you meant "her blonder hair", did you? (Sorry, I couldn't help it. It was right on the second line) Anyway, despite that tiny error, I loved it...loved it...loved it!
10/23/06
Excellent illustration. The little needed work on the grammar has already been noted so I'll just say "nice job."