The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed your retelling of this Bible story. You did a nice job helping me imagine Simon's lifestyle. That added a lot to your story. Thanks for sharing it!
A strong voice here for the beginning of the disciples' lives.
Loved the way you took us back in time. It was as if we were there, observing these things. Reminds me of the writing style used in "Two From Galilee"
You have a true gift.