The Official Writing Challenge
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10/14/06
I LIKED this very much! You show talent. (But when typing, you do need to put a space after every comma and period.) A very engrossing encounter with the fire within. Awesome.
10/16/06
To make your work "Reader friendly", you should separate paragraphs, space between comma's etc. Each time you will get better...never give up.