The Official Writing Challenge
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Your story gripped me - mostly I think because you felt fear "but did it scared." You prayed for help in time of trouble and God showed Himself strong in providing a way out. Thanks for sharing!
10/14/06
Wow. You really griped my attention! Sitting on the edge a my seat! Great description very vivid. I could definetly feel the fire-fighter's fear.
10/14/06
Powerfully, vividly told. You had me a little confused becasue I think there was a scene shift (was he standing at one fire thinking back to another?) which needed spelling out a bit more, but otherwise this is very good writing.
10/17/06
Suspense had me sitting on the edge of my chair! Was he going to make it?! The words "Need a hand?" made my eyes sting as tears sprang up in relief! Very interesting, exciting and entertaining read...with a Happy Ending. The writing needs a little editing here and there, but the storyline was great...and right on topic! Nicely done!