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10/14/06
You inspired me to enjoy autumn afresh this year, although I confess myself a little puzzled about the connection to fire fighting.
10/16/06
(Ditto Helen on use of the topic.)
I really liked this line: "Remember the autumns of your childhood. Remember the leaves of time falling in abundance". I could see the autumns of my childhood, fallen away. Great thoughts on being thankful for nature, and firefighters!
10/17/06
A nice devotional, but needs paragraph spacing. Also a little thin on Topic, but bountiful with "Thanks" entertwined with God's beautiful nature. Very nice.