The Official Writing Challenge
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10/15/06
What an amazing message! I would have loved to hear more detail on the arsonist's transformation, as well as the assistance of the firefighter. I also got thrown off for a bit when you changed your point of view. This is a wonderfully told story, however - one that truly inspired me!!
10/16/06
I would have like to hear this story from just one person's view, rather than you just telling me what happened. It would give it much more details. Having siad that, its a great story with a lot of potential. Keep up the good work.