The Official Writing Challenge
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Very good poem with an vital message. Enjoyed it very much.
I like your creative use of the fire-fighter theme. And not only did you use good creativity, but you also shared some very important truths in this poem. Nice job!

I really like the comparison of spoken words to fire! Very creative and hits home with every reader. With just a bit of work on smoothing out the rhythm in your lines you'll have a really wonderful poem here! Good job!!
Awesome analogy between gossip and fire. Very creative. Keep up the great work!
Loved the Title - and good job on the rhythym; a true poet with masteful message; So true about our tongue. As a poet myself, I know the effort that went into this. Nice job!
Please post more poems like this at my poetry group (Poetry and Poets of God):