The Official Writing Challenge
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09/17/06
The memories were absolutely wonderful. Being a southern girl of a working familiy, my own garden memories were stirred by this piece.

The flow of this piece was off. It seemed disjointed and it was difficult to follow. The thoughts were a little too random. A little reorganizaion is all that is needed.

Overall, I like the thoughts. Thanks for bringing up my own memories. :)