The Official Writing Challenge
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09/07/06
A very good comparison of the importance the natural water and the river of living water.
well done!
09/11/06
What I like - This was a well written devotional. You made some clear comparisons and kept it flowing.
What I might change - The ending was good but I found myself wanting scripture there again after you drew the comparion. But that is just me:) Good writing!!