The Official Writing Challenge
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I was riveted to this story from beginning to end. Exceptionally well done! Your last line is PERFECT. Wonderful job!
Whoa...amazing! You gripped my attention with an iron ahand and didn't let go till the end! (And thanks so much for not giving us the old favorite "cabin-just-a-few-yards-away-and-after-despairing-of-hope-now-she-looks-up-and-sees-it" line.)

Marvelous job! Keep up with the awesome writing!
Very descriptive and entertaining. It held my attention.