The Official Writing Challenge
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09/09/06
I was riveted to this story from beginning to end. Exceptionally well done! Your last line is PERFECT. Wonderful job!
09/10/06
Whoa...amazing! You gripped my attention with an iron ahand and didn't let go till the end! (And thanks so much for not giving us the old favorite "cabin-just-a-few-yards-away-and-after-despairing-of-hope-now-she-looks-up-and-sees-it" line.)

Marvelous job! Keep up with the awesome writing!
Very descriptive and entertaining. It held my attention.