The Official Writing Challenge
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This was very good. Thanks for sharing.
+Neat story! I loved the ending. The stroyline was really good and I liked how you described the storm over the river.
-Sometimes her nieces and nephews got kinda mixed up with her children, which confused me. I know there's a word limit, but I want to know more! Why is she a single parent? Why did she feel compelled to take her sister's kids for a week? But, then again, that's my personal opinion.