The Official Writing Challenge
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09/03/06
A lovely little tale! I enjoyed the fairy tale quality of this, and the interaction.
09/05/06
What I like- this story was very creative! Great first paragaph - prefect children's story. I love how you wove in the song.Great ending.
What I might change- the spacing between the dialogue.