The Official Writing Challenge
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03/22/05
This is a nice story. The images of the watchmen gave me a word picture that held over to the lesson portion at the end. Ever vigilent. Thanks for the reminder. God bless.
03/23/05
Great imagery and a powerful reminder that time is of the essence; we must be on the ready, for ... the King is coming, indeed! Nice job- Nancy
I think the next to last paragraph would have read better if it had been the last. Because I think that is the last thing you want the reader pondering. Good imagery here.