The Official Writing Challenge
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09/01/06
You certainly caught the essense of melody within these beautiful words!
09/03/06
The poem was lovely, and the closing section amplified its beauty. Well done!
Very nice. I felt myself on the dance floor.
09/05/06
It takes a skilled writer to describe melody in terms of movement and dance. Bravo!
09/06/06
Lovely - and I love the explanation as well. The two complement each other very well!
09/06/06
This is beautiful! Thanks for the explanation. It can be read on many layers; your original intention, dancing, a couple in perfect relationship or an allegory of an eternal relationship. Well done. This is what poetry should be.