The Official Writing Challenge
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08/31/06
Wow. I really liked this. I liked the idea of music being a painting, and actually used a modified idea in my entry. Great job.
09/02/06
Isn't it funny how God works sometimes? Tone deaf, unable to sing, yet writes SONG lyrics. Hmmm. Sounds like a God thing to me.
The piece was good, laced with humor (which I love!). I didn't really understand what the opening (and title) about Bruce and Sarah's daughter had to with it, unless it was their daughter, Melody, speaking. But that wasn't quite clear to me. A suggestion I would make is to come full-circle and tie everything up at the end with the Bruce and Sarah thing. This gives a sense of satisfaction to the reader. Well done!
09/03/06
I loved the idea of the musical parts being portrayed by colors. A lovely imagination, and I can so imagine that God would lead someone like this to be a songwriter. God uses us in spite of ourselves.