The Official Writing Challenge
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08/25/06
"...difficult to find God in the streets of Jerusalem today..." How sad! And you captured the melancholy very well.
08/30/06
What I liked about this piece...It was an honest opinion about a visit to Jerusalem. My husband said much the same. Very commercialized. Unexpected unless prepared for the experience.