The Official Writing Challenge
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03/14/05
I enjoyed your poem. Nicely written.
Nice job. Well written. I like the lines: "For the things we often hear, are not always what we dream". I enjoyed your poem.
He is like a prowling lion Waiting there to pounce, If we wallow in our sin, And give into him an ounce.

I loved those lines as that is what it seems, someone ready to pounce if we let our guard down in our faith. The flow, the imagery, you got it all together in this poem. Great read