The Official Writing Challenge
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03/15/05
A favorite teacher of mine said that the Bible never said that the Prov. 31 woman did all of these things at the same time, and that it was more likely that she did each thing in its season, which is a lot less overwhelming.
I, too, chose to write about the woman of Proverbs, ("The Shrewd Woman of Proverbs"). I find myself under a lot of pressure comparing my life to hers. But she is someone we should all strive to be like. Nice job.
03/17/05
The part I always liked was she had servants! We could all do more with a few extra hands. :0) Nice entry.
03/20/05
I think we all have moments when we actually get there - maybe those moments don't last long, but we do get there!
I like the way you throw yourself in first, before starting the story. You cleverly wrote her virtures and let us admire her once again. You took a style that isn't easy to write, half first person, half story telling and did it very well. Great read