The Official Writing Challenge
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Date
08/26/06
What I like - Good devotional! Straight to the point and I like the story in the middle.
What I might change - the spacing needs to be corrected so the reader can read it better. I might rework the first paragraph abit...maybe...but overall, it was very enjoyable.:)
Awesome message, thanks for sharing.