The Official Writing Challenge
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08/18/06
Fascinating locale, and a frightening story! I liked your deft touch with dialog, and your lighthandedness with the message here. Good job.
08/21/06
Wow! Very nicely done. Kept my attention throughout with wonderful dialogue and gripping story line.
08/21/06
God's timing is always perfect, as long as someone is listening. Thank you for sharing.
08/22/06
A great telling! And I love your multiple uses of the title theme (if you know what I'm saying!) - it permeates this piece! Love the ending too! Super writing!
08/22/06
Wow! This was terrific writing! Your dialogue and 'show not tell' was perfect all the way through!But the endind was what choked me up - just enough and it drew me back to the title. Good job! I hope you place!
I agree--very well written!
08/23/06
Testing.
08/23/06
An awesome story - well done.