The Official Writing Challenge
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08/20/06
Beautiful, beautiful images - you paint a lovely portrait with your words. Loved your ending, too! Great job with this!!!
08/21/06
Yes...beautiful words. You created wonderful images throughout.
08/21/06
I agree--beautiful images and colorful descriptions were very nicely done. I must admit, however, that I had to read a couple of times to catch that there were two people. I must be a little tired tonight.