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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Valley (08/10/06)

TITLE: In Your World
By Dawn Dale
08/15/06


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My pen ~ can't lay down

My soul has been found

In the beauty of Your world.



I look across the road

Trees of green will soon be gold

Yet, there's a story still untold

In the mystery of Your world.



Times and epochs ~ men will say

Point us to a better way.

And Your love, yes, it may

Show the depth of Your world.



Kings and Queens cannot compete

With the rhythm and lyric

Of Your Superior Majestic

Glory in the stillness of Your world.



I've seen heighths and I've seen dearth.

I've seen depth and I've seen worth.

Yet, the fruitful valley rest

Is my highest sought out quest.



For in the valley, when the I gaze,

Trees of gold illume my haze

As, in view of Heaven's Son,

Warm glow through branches spun

Each frame that's here undone

Becomes golden in Light of Your world.



For, from the valley's splendid view

When your sites shall seek His gaze

Through His Superior Majestic hue

From His glory, in His world, all vision is golden haze.



When we arrive, we will know

What that cause of golden glow?

For, if streets are paved with gold,

Then, the mountains, purple silk.

Oh, the valley's must be clothed with valley's grandma homespun quilt.



No ~ my pen can't lay down

For my soul has been found

In the beauty, mystery, depth

And the mountains, streets, and valley's

In Your world.


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Joanne Sher 08/20/06
Lovely images - work a bit on the meter and this would be even better! Beautiful!