The Official Writing Challenge
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08/20/06
great analogy! I enjoyed this. Watch your run-on sentences. Thanks for writing!
08/23/06
I loved your 2nd paragraph. I thought it would have made a much stronger intro paragraph. End that paragraph just as you did with: "Flat land makes me..." A little work on punctuation would also help tighten this up a bit. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing.
08/23/06
I liked this. Intriguing, good concept. Worth exploring some more of the idea. Has a very mystical feel.