The Official Writing Challenge
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08/19/06
What a neat take on "Valley!" I'm not sure what word you wanted to use when you said "delebated," but I enjoyed this cute story. The title caught my attention and the last line was perfect! Good work!
08/19/06
This is a fascinating read. Good job!
This is SO sweet. I almost shed a tear for Valiant Valley. Loved the writing!
08/22/06
I am pretty sure the word you were looking for was:

Dilapidated

Some funny parts here, and I do like the closing, 'rust in peace'