The Official Writing Challenge
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08/18/06
You really brought this character to life. I enjoyed his narrative of the story, and the dialect used.
08/19/06
Awesome!
08/19/06
Excellent. What a great story with a super twist.
Wow, being an animal lover it is sad, but at the same time helps me understand His sacrifice. Loved the character.
08/24/06
Congrats on placing for the 3rd week in a row!!! Awesome writer you are! I do believe there is a seat waiting for you in Masters! You know this means you must go to advanced now (with only you 3rd entry!) Great job! You have a God-given talent for this!
08/24/06
Lisa, Lisa, Lisa, another outstanding story. I love great character development and reading a story that flows soooo well. Congrats on your first place. It is very well deserved. God Bless.
08/24/06
Lisa - what an amazing talent you have!! You just keep placing and placing and placing!! Wonderful story well-told, and a VERY well-deserved win!
08/24/06
What a precious story! Your parable illustrates the Gospel better than many a sermon. Congratulations on your win---so well deserved!
Your story is a vivid picture of salvation. Congratulations on your win!