The Official Writing Challenge
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You really brought this character to life. I enjoyed his narrative of the story, and the dialect used.
Excellent. What a great story with a super twist.
Wow, being an animal lover it is sad, but at the same time helps me understand His sacrifice. Loved the character.
Congrats on placing for the 3rd week in a row!!! Awesome writer you are! I do believe there is a seat waiting for you in Masters! You know this means you must go to advanced now (with only you 3rd entry!) Great job! You have a God-given talent for this!
Lisa, Lisa, Lisa, another outstanding story. I love great character development and reading a story that flows soooo well. Congrats on your first place. It is very well deserved. God Bless.
Lisa - what an amazing talent you have!! You just keep placing and placing and placing!! Wonderful story well-told, and a VERY well-deserved win!
What a precious story! Your parable illustrates the Gospel better than many a sermon. Congratulations on your win---so well deserved!
Your story is a vivid picture of salvation. Congratulations on your win!