The Official Writing Challenge
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08/11/06
What a wonderful tribute--is it a true story?
08/11/06
Very nicely done. I enjoyed this piece; great message and writing; kept my attention throughout.
What a sweet story! You can really feel the heart of God through it.
08/13/06

I enjoyed reading your story, What a unique ministry!
What a great story! It kept my attention too. I was in the park and could smell the popcorn! One writing tip...instead of writing "would come
, maybe you could just say came and "would tell" he told and "would reminisce" could be they reminisced. The "would" is a bit of a distraction when you could just use the word in in action. :) It would help the story flow even better than what you have already done. Wonderful job! Doreen
08/15/06
A very sweet, well written story. Good job. God bless.
08/16/06
Heartwarming! Great job!!
08/16/06
A lovely story with a wonderful ministry idea! Is it true? Wonderful writing!