The Official Writing Challenge
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08/11/06
Definitely thought-provoking. First-rate writing skills.
08/11/06
Title was intriquing, and while I understood right away your imagery about the jars. at times, the switching back and forth bothered me. The second to the last reference to the jars wasn't quite clear. Otherwise, writing was grand.