The Official Writing Challenge
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08/10/06
Wow...excellent detail with their movements and everything as the dialogue takes place. Great ending too! I noticed when she said 'tell to your pastor' you added an extra word I think. I think your style of writing is really good!:)
08/11/06
Excellent writing here.
08/16/06
Very interesting story and well told. What a great ending! Still, it made me wish I could turn the page to read more.
08/16/06
This is so delightful. I can just see my granddaughters in the two girls, and the pastor sounds like our own! The dialog sounds so real, as well. Definitely more of this one needed, here!