The Official Writing Challenge
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03/15/05
Well done. It always pays to be good stewards of what God gives.
Sometimes it's hard to not seek revenge but rather salvage what you can and forgive and move on. I thought the last paragraph dialog was a little contrite and maybe because you were using the word shrewdness in there. I don't know if it was necessary because you showed in your story how one was shrew with hre money and problem solved very well. Good read
03/21/05
Congratulations Delores on your 6th place in the Editors' Choice awards, AND your 2nd place win in the Level 2 Champion Challenge. Well done! Based on your very good final rating, I really think it's time for you to move up to Level 3. You're ready for it! Love, Deb (Challenge Co-ordinator)