The Official Writing Challenge
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08/10/06
Cute devotional! I hope you submit it somewhere if it doesn't place here. The dialogue was perfect!!
Oh, I loved this because my Mom could never seen the hidden pictures, either! LOL
08/11/06
I've had almost exactly this same conversation with my daughter...and I never could see them, just got a huge headache. Great job with this one.
08/11/06
Terrific story and dialogue; I enjoyed this very much.
08/16/06
I loved the realistic dialogue between the mother and son. This was a very enjoyable read with a good message. Well done.
Congrats on placing 2nd!
08/17/06
This was actually based on recent events, which took place on a school trip. The children in my group tried hard to explain the 'Magic Eye' picture, but I still couldn't get it! I was disappointed, as everyone else seemed to see the image of a shepherd!
08/18/06
A VERY well-deserved win! I can definitely relate to this too -my brother got one of these pictures for me probably 10 years ago, and I STILL can't see it! It's a constant joke in our house. Wonderful job!!