The Official Writing Challenge
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08/10/06
Loved your vivid verb choices and perfect dialogue. Great story with a sad but telling ending. You described the windshield exploding perfectly:)
08/11/06
Very well done, with a sympathetic and realistic main character.
08/12/06
Very well done. Story moved right along and kept my attention throughout. Authentic descriptions and good character development.
I really liked this. You can't help but feel his frustration. Great work!