The Official Writing Challenge
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08/11/06
Excellent writing, great description of the vision, very effective use of the present tense. I really liked this piece.
08/16/06
I agree with Jan, totally. I relish good writing and this is a delicious feast. You certainly know how to put words together to paint the scene for your reader. I look forward to more from you.
08/17/06
Excellent! I wanted to turn the page and find out God's revelation to the main character. Congrats on your placement!
Awesome job Steve. I could see my own pastor sitting there. Congrats on placing!
Congratulations on your win! Your story is excellent, and right on!
08/17/06
WhooHoo, Steve! First place! Congratulations. No wonder: "I look forward to more from you" since I'm already tracking you. I'm pleased as I can be for you.
08/18/06
This is wonderful, and SO deserving of a win! I was drawn in from the first word, and didn't want it to end! Excellent!!