The Official Writing Challenge
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08/11/06
This is a top-notch illustration and object lesson. A cozy devotional; I liked it. Perhaps an extra "enter" between paragraphs to more clearly separate them? Thanks for sharing from your heart.
08/16/06
I like your fresh analogy. This is an easy to read, and understand, message.