The Official Writing Challenge
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08/11/06
Great message here--really goes straight to the heart. My suggestion would be to work on punctuation of dialog, and of eliminating dialog tags as much as possible. You've created a wonderful character in this pastor. Good job!
08/12/06
Unfortunately, too many pastors these days are a lot like Roger. That's why I loved this pastor. Many many churches could learn from this story. I also like how it tied in really well with the topic for the week.
08/15/06
This really reminds me what the focus of the church should be. Thanks for sharing this story.
08/16/06
This goes in my favorites. How often does the world actually see Jesus in action through us? I hope you have this published in a periodical with wide circulation! You know the way to convey a message through a beloved character. Thank you!