The Official Writing Challenge
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Great message here--really goes straight to the heart. My suggestion would be to work on punctuation of dialog, and of eliminating dialog tags as much as possible. You've created a wonderful character in this pastor. Good job!
Unfortunately, too many pastors these days are a lot like Roger. That's why I loved this pastor. Many many churches could learn from this story. I also like how it tied in really well with the topic for the week.
This really reminds me what the focus of the church should be. Thanks for sharing this story.
This goes in my favorites. How often does the world actually see Jesus in action through us? I hope you have this published in a periodical with wide circulation! You know the way to convey a message through a beloved character. Thank you!