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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: First (as in original) (01/10/05)

TITLE: God is the First and the Last
By MILENA ASSENOVA
01/16/05


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God is the creator of all things
The original
The only one
The Alpha & Omega
The 1st ever
The maker of our lives


He created the heavens, the earth
The universe,
The sun the moon & the stars
The night and the daylight
The oceans and the land
How more can I expand
He created Adam
Breathed life into his being
Then Eve was made
Adamís rib he used


Every time you take a breath
Thatís him
Every time you need to confess
Thatís him
Every time you understand why
Thatís him


He makes us breath
He makes our heart beat
He makes us fit perfectly
He makes us function amazingly
Itís all miraculously


Donít you ever wonder?
Who makes you skip a beat?
Who makes you cry, laugh and wonder why?
Who makes you live your life?
Who makes you do the right?
Who gives us the knowledge?
Differentiate between right and wrong


A woman growing a baby in her tummy
Is much more than a scientific explanation
Much more than fertilisation
Such complicated anatomy
But it works day after day
Fully it was prepared before it was made
God thought of every tiny microscopic detail
When he made everything fit so perfectly


The ďBig BangĒ is not enough for me
There is more than life we see
Going back to the cells and evolution
This life cannot just exist naturally


Everything has origins you see
Logically it makes sense
There is a beginning and an end
A source from where it extends
A root from which it grew
Everything finished has a purpose
Made with a mission
Nothing is there for any reason


The Bible is our story
Our History
Chapter 1 is Genesis
The Beginnings of all beings
Revelation is the last chapter
The end of times
The end of all things


Judgement day will begin
New dimension will be
A whole transformation
Mortality will suddenly be immortality
Then there are two sides to this story
The Good and the Bad
On earth we have got to decide
Which side are we taking?
In the end all things would go
Back to the Original maker
He would punish us accordingly


The FIRST!
This is the Creator
This is Our God
There is no other
This is the Father
The First and the Last


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Norma OGrady01/17/05
Bravo
I love how you said it all in the words of this poem.
Blessings
Yashua Bless
Debbie OConnor01/17/05
This is very good. I love the imagery used.

I do think there are some little things that should be polished to make it stronger. Ex. He makes us "breathe" not "breath". Who makes you(r heart) skip a beat. I also think it would look better to spell out "and" rather than use "&" and numbers.

All in all, these are little things. The content of your poem was wonderful, I'd just like to see it finessed.
MILENA ASSENOVA01/22/05
thank you all for your comments it is much appreciated. God Bless
Deborah Anderson01/22/05
God truly is the first and the last. Thank you for sharing this. God bless you.
L.M. Lee01/23/05
excellent poem