The Official Writing Challenge
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08/03/06
I really liked this story! The topic at the end really tied it together. The only critique I would have was that you get into Bill's head near the end as well as being in Jennifer's. And that's pretty simple to correct. Thanks for sharing!
08/03/06
You must have a camera and mic at my house! This is fantastic! I love the ending topic, it wrapped it all up so well.
08/05/06
I'd hate to add to your tears by saying anything discouraging...so instead I will make you smile. Good job, nicely done. Thank you for sharing your story with other members of Faithwriters.
08/06/06
Thanks for describing what I'm sure we've all gone through at one time or another. Criticism is never easy, but it should make us better writers. Thanks for your vulnerability, girl. I'm looking forward to seeing you win someday!!
Wouldn't we all like to write like Dickens?! Thanks for encouraging us all with your story.
08/07/06
You've only been participating in FaithWriters for a few months and have already hit top forty 3-4 times? I would say you're doing great! We all need encouragement. Thanks for sharing your story with us. Keep up the good work;)
08/07/06
Great, funny, (if I say watch your tenses you won't be upset will you?!) Enjoyed this.
08/07/06
I think we all CAN relate to this in some way (other than Kenn, of course!). Thanks for reminding us we're not alone!!
08/07/06
Oh yes. I think ALL of us can relate to this. I found myself adjusting what she was saying and laughing at myself! ("I've never placed in the top 40 and....")
08/07/06
I enjoyed this piece. I could relate in more ways than one. I've only been here 3 mos., too, and haven't placed. (sniff, sniff) I just wonder, why wasn't this written in the 1st person?...Hmmm...Great work, though! Thanks for sharing what everyone is feeling at one time or another.
Thanks for sharing and showing me I'm not the only one here that feels this way. I truly believe if we write for the glory of HIM then we've already made #1 GC...Gods Choice.
08/09/06
Yep! We've all been here! And, for some mysterious reason, we're all driven to submit another entry! Just when I think I want to give up, I get a wonderful comment that urges me on.

Blessings in your writing!

I leave Reflections for Faith Writers because there are more light,fun to read ... and write... articles. As I read I was saying "true... true.." then laughed at confidence. You brightened my day!