The Official Writing Challenge
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02/27/06
Your title got my attention. Usually, I just skim the "sermonettes," looking for parable-stories. So, I was, initially, going to suggest you move one of your illustrations up to the opening lines, to draw your readers into your message. But, I decided to back up and read the whole article and decided You "done good" as is. Good job---keep writing!