The Official Writing Challenge
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02/21/14
Oh my goodness...what a beautiful story! I loved each and every word in your entry.

Excellent work!

God bless~
02/23/14
I enjoyed reading this piece. Thanks for sharing the inspiration you receive from your friend in Christ, reminding me we have a choice - wearing our problems on our sleeve, or reflecting the image of Christ.
02/24/14
You will not be at Level 1 for long, I am sure. This was wonderful to read. I felt like I knew both women already.

I'm not sure if I've read a better explanation of spiritual maturity than this, "The biggest question she pondered was not her faith but what lesson God had for her throughout the entire, grueling process."

Great stuff. Keep writing, please.
02/24/14
What a beautiful story! It left me feeling peaceful and aware of God's powerful hand in our lives.

Just a little note about your dialogue: you should start a new paragraph when the speaker changes.

This story has such a sweet and yet poignant message. I look forward to reading more of your work!

02/27/14
A lovely story with a good message. I especially liked, 'No my friend, that message was for me.'

It flowed well to its conclusion but I think it would benefit by being broken up into more paragraphs.

Good Job!
02/27/14
Oops! I meant to say lesson, not message.
02/27/14
Congratulations!

God bless~