The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/14
Now you must put this to music because it reads just like song lyrics. Know someone who plays guitar? Nicely done!
01/25/14
Upbeat and powerful. Loved it.

God bless~
This is really cute! I agree it sounds like it could be turned into a song.

Great job!
01/28/14
Bravo! I love this little poem. Sweet and concise, with good flow. Keep on writing!
01/30/14
Congrats!!!

God bless~
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