The Official Writing Challenge
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11/14/13
I loved your segue into the powerful choice of scriptures you provided. Nicely done, and nicely expressed.

God bless~
11/18/13
Thank you for this reminder that we, as Christians are on display before the eyes of the world.

I can see you obviously have a talent for writing. And I hope you'll continue to grow as a writer, and polish your work more and more, scrutinizing each sentence and word. Perhaps you could add a little more descriptive language, showing examples of your main points.

I can't wait to read your next piece! Good work.
11/18/13
This is a very strong devotional, well done.
11/18/13
Oh! by the way, I like the examples that you've used to solidify your point; the one about the president especially.