The Official Writing Challenge
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Good thoughts on how much we limit our thinking.

I would divide you thoughts into short paragraphs; some with even containing one sentence.

You have some power short sentences. Make them a paragraph.

I would like to see more of your writing.
07/29/13
Your knowledge of God's Word is obvious and your command of language is also apparent.

I always preview my entries before submitting. I have to reformat many times to be sure I have double spaces between paragraphs. Readers like white spaces...makes things easier to read.

Thanks for sharing and please keep entering the challenges.
I enjoyed the thoughts you expressed. Although you didn't need the extra word count for this article, if you leave the title off (it is shown when you submit it), you will have more words available when needed. The word "rashins" appears to be a misspelling or typo. Did you mean rations? Well done.