The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a wonderful subject for a devotion and you picked great scripture verses. You started the first two sentences or so in the first person, then switched to the third person, I think it mould have had a stronger impact if youhad stayed mirth the first person. Swill admit I do spend far too much time worrying about thing I can't change. Thanks for the reminder.
03/04/11
great piece. well written I think many people will be able to relate to the tie consuming worries.. and educational too :-)
03/08/11
I could so relate to your message. I have an active mind and think a lot about the what ifs. I had no idea what a Gowb was, before reading your piece. The analogy of locusts is right on.

Thank you.
Congratulations for placing 7th in level one!