The Official Writing Challenge
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01/31/11
wow real life indeed. I love your descriptions of the two car journeys and the contrast. You tell this in a heartfelt and poignient way. well done.
02/02/11
I really felt like I was with this woman on her journey. What a word to be given - cancer. And her all alone, too. I can't imagine.
02/03/11
Real life is full of pain and challenges. I loved the last line of your story.
You created a sense of suspense right away. Then Iwas outraged with the way the doctor was so callous. You had a great message.Congratulations for placing 10th in level one!