The Official Writing Challenge
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02/13/09
I loved the simple picture of the little girl. It was a joy to read.
02/13/09
I embraced Maria as I read and found your story to contain a wonderful message of love.
02/15/09
I've read a number of entries on mission trips. What a pleasure to read one told from the viewpoint of an observer! Maria's childish curiosity and confusion come across loud and clear.
02/18/09
I love this. It is a very real glimpse into the simplicity of sharing the gospel with children.

Charlene Reid