The Official Writing Challenge
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07/19/05
This is an awesome start to something. More description of the dreams would be cool. Keep writing! :)
07/20/05
As a reader, I would have liked to see more detail. The story was good. The man may have been hunting illegally at night--a poacher for instance. Keep writing--nice story. God bless, littlelight
07/20/05
The beginning was great - BOOM! I couldn't wait to read more. Having experienced a shooting in my workplace, however, I'd be especially interested in how the gunshot made you feel and in knowing more about the hunter.
07/21/05
This could be a chilling story. Hunters and campers do not mix - especially if the hunter is a night poacher.
Very good but should be longer. Thanks for sharing!