The Official Writing Challenge
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The object of this, is to concentrate on the Lord, right? Nice job! I liked the flowing lines and how your title fit in. ^_^
08/04/08
I like the turning point from I had less of You and more of me to I needed more of Him and less of me. A lack of concentration on the Lord and too much concentration on self can create great havoc and damage in our lives. You have conveyed this point very well.