The Official Writing Challenge
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WOW! This is truly excellent! I loved, it's one of my favorites this week, simply amazed! The balloon comparison to the memories was so different, I could relate to each of those emotions and the ending was just perfect. I loved it! ^_^
07/20/08
I love how you compared balloons to memories. I liked the imagery also, I could see in technicolor what I read.